Do Children Need to Take Many Kinds of Courses?

These days, children are having their lifestyle changed by the modern learning system [1]. Every child has their own capacity to use their brain, thus [2] they need more capacity to adjust to the sophisticated living which is not going to be good if their knowledge is not enough [3]. 

For some parents, taking [4] a course is a must because it may help their children to complete the material from school and learn many things which are not included in a formal education [5]. Meanwhile,[6] the rest of them think that it is not a must to have our child taught outside the formal one[7] because they believe their child could learn many things by themselves[8] as the time goes by[9].

Dr. Luthar & Polly Young-Eisendrath, clinical psychology and also a book writer "The Self-Esteem Trap", says that “pushing children to do many things after school may give a problem to their life”[10]. It seems that the level of getting stressed is very easy to get in order to [11] fulfill their institutional things. Actually,[12] taking many kinds of courses can be altered with other activities  such as outdoor activities, social activities, and family time [13].

 Were I a parent, I would not let my children take many kinds of courses [14]. As a parent, I neither ask nor[15] force them to have more classes outside the formal one. Although [16] they don’t have any course, I would rather they studied hard [17].

[1] Formal passive

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[3] Adjective clause
[4] Gerund
[5] Formal passive
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[7] Formal passive
[8] Reduced adjective clause
[9] Idiom - adverb of time
[10] Direct speech
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[13] Formal passive
[14] Inversion
[15] Cool word - neither...nor...
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[17] Cool word - would rather